Natasha Nice Jason ... — 50. A Pov Story - Loyalty -

Here is where the POV shifts. Because loyalty isn’t about right or wrong. It’s about whose story you choose to believe.

I had evidence. A flash drive with recordings, dates, photos. Victor was a monster. Natasha was a survivor. But I also had a code: I don’t rat on clients. She had hired me to find her husband. I found him—face-down in a drainage ditch outside of Trenton, three bullets in his chest.

The Marchettis didn’t know Natasha had set him up. They thought he’d tried to run. They were happy. She was free. And I was holding a secret that could either save her or bury her.

“Finish the job,” she said the night we met in my office for the last time. “Tell them the truth. Or help me disappear. Either way, I’ll accept it.”

I looked at her—really looked. Behind the armor of expensive clothes and sharper words was a woman who had been betrayed by the one person who should have protected her. She wasn’t asking for my forgiveness. She was asking for my loyalty.

“Where do you want to go?” I asked.

She smiled. For the first time, it reached her eyes. “Somewhere with no numbers. No families. Just sky.”


I drove her to the border myself. A two-lane highway cutting through pines and silence. We didn’t talk much. At the crossing, she handed me an envelope. “For your trouble.”

I opened it. Inside was a photograph—Victor and a Marchetti underboss shaking hands over a document dated three years ago. The document was a contract. For her.

“Why are you giving me this?” I asked.

“Because you earned it. And because now you have the truth, not just my version of it. What you do with it… that’s your loyalty test, Jason. Not mine.”

She walked across the border. I watched until her figure blurred into the horizon. Then I burned the photograph in the ashtray of my car.

Here’s what I learned: Loyalty isn’t about being faithful to a person, a promise, or a code. It’s about being faithful to the moment when you realize that some betrayals are actually acts of survival.

Natasha Nice didn’t break Victor. Victor broke himself the moment he forgot that loyalty is a mirror—it shows you exactly who you are.

As for me? I still run the office above the laundromat. The phone still rings. And sometimes, late at night, I think I see a woman with honey-colored hair walking past the window. She never looks back.

That’s the fiftieth way to break a man. You make him complicit in a kindness he can never speak aloud. 50. A POV Story - Loyalty - Natasha Nice Jason ...

End of POV Story.


Author’s Note: This piece is a work of neo-noir fiction. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is entirely coincidental. The themes of loyalty, betrayal, and moral ambiguity are explored here as narrative devices.

A Bond of Loyalty: A POV Story - Natasha Nice and Jason

As I sat on the couch, staring blankly at the TV, I couldn't help but think about the concept of loyalty. What does it truly mean to be loyal to someone? Is it just a word, a promise, or is it something deeper?

I looked over at Jason, who was sitting beside me, engrossed in his phone. We've been friends for years, and I've always admired his unwavering loyalty to those he cares about. He's the kind of person who will drop everything to help you out, no matter what.

I thought back to the times when we've hung out with Natasha, a mutual friend who's been through some tough times. Jason has always been there for her, offering a listening ear and a helping hand. He's never wavered in his support, even when things got tough.

As I reflected on our friendships, I realized that loyalty is more than just a word. It's a bond that forms between people, a commitment to stand by each other through thick and thin. It's about being present, being supportive, and being honest.

Natasha walked into the room, a smile on her face. "Hey guys, what's up?" she asked, plopping down beside us on the couch.

We chatted for a while, catching up on each other's lives. As we talked, I couldn't help but feel grateful for the loyalty that Jason and Natasha have shown me over the years. They're more than just friends - they're a support system, a safety net that I can always rely on.

As the night wore on, we started discussing our plans for the future. Jason mentioned a potential business venture, and Natasha and I offered our support. We talked about the risks and challenges, but also the opportunities and rewards.

As we wrapped up our conversation, I looked at Jason and Natasha, and I knew that our bond of loyalty was unbreakable. We're in this together, through the ups and downs, and I wouldn't trade our friendships for anything.

The Power of Loyalty

As I reflected on our conversation, I realized that loyalty is a powerful force. It can bring people together, create strong bonds, and provide a sense of security and stability.

But loyalty is not just about being there for someone; it's also about being honest and authentic. It's about being willing to have tough conversations, to challenge each other, and to grow together.

As I looked at Jason and Natasha, I knew that our friendships are a testament to the power of loyalty. We've been through ups and downs, and we've come out stronger on the other side. Here is where the POV shifts

Lessons Learned

As I sat on the couch, surrounded by my friends, I learned a valuable lesson about loyalty. It's not just a word; it's a commitment to be there for someone, no matter what. It's about being present, supportive, and honest.

If you're looking to build stronger relationships in your life, focus on loyalty. Be there for your friends and family, through thick and thin. Offer a listening ear, a helping hand, and a supportive shoulder.

And as you do, you'll find that loyalty comes full circle. Your friends and family will be there for you, too, offering their support and love. Together, you can face anything that life throws your way.

Conclusion

Loyalty is a powerful force that can bring people together and create strong bonds. It's a commitment to be there for someone, no matter what, and to be present, supportive, and honest.

As I looked at Jason and Natasha, I knew that our friendships are a testament to the power of loyalty. We've been through ups and downs, and we've come out stronger on the other side.

If you're looking to build stronger relationships in your life, focus on loyalty. Be there for your friends and family, through thick and thin. Offer a listening ear, a helping hand, and a supportive shoulder.

And as you do, you'll find that loyalty comes full circle. Your friends and family will be there for you, too, offering their support and love. Together, you can face anything that life throws your way.

I met Natasha Nice on a Tuesday that tasted like cheap whiskey and regret. She walked into my office—a cramped space above a laundromat on 7th—wearing a trench coat that cost more than my first car. Her hair was the color of honey left too long in the sun. Her eyes were the problem, though. They were the eyes of someone who had already lost everything and was just going through the motions of pretending she hadn't.

“You’re the guy who finds people,” she said. No hello. No smile.

“I’m the guy who finds things,” I corrected. “People are just a side effect.”

She sat down, crossing legs that seemed to go on for days. “My husband is missing. His name is Victor. He runs numbers for the Marchetti family.”

I leaned back. “That’s a bold thing to admit to a stranger.”

“You’re not a stranger, Jason. You’re the last honest man in this city. That’s what they say.” I drove her to the border myself

They were wrong. But I didn’t correct her.

Here’s the first rule of loyalty: it’s never about the person you’re loyal to. It’s about the version of yourself you become when you make a promise. I promised Natasha I would find Victor. I didn’t know that promise would cost me my soul.


For three weeks, I followed ghosts. Victor Nice had pissed off the wrong people—skimmed from a payout meant for the Gambetti crew. Standard suicide mission. But something didn’t smell right. Every lead I chased looped back to Natasha herself.

She knew more than she was telling.

I confronted her at a diner called The Copper Mug, a dive where the coffee is black and the secrets are darker. “You’re not looking for a husband,” I said. “You’re looking for permission.”

She didn’t blink. “Permission for what?”

“To stop pretending you didn’t hand him over.”

The silence that followed was louder than any gunshot. Then she did something I didn’t expect. She laughed. Not a cruel laugh. A tired one. The laugh of someone who has danced with the devil so long she’s forgotten the steps to any other song.

“Victor sold me to the Marchettis as collateral three years ago,” she said. “He owed them $200,000. I was the interest. I’ve been… entertaining their associates ever since. Last month, I found out he was planning to sell me again—to a man in Prague who collects women like baseball cards.”

“So you killed him,” I said.

“No, Jason.” Her voice dropped to a whisper. “I just pointed him toward the wolves. Loyalty is a two-way street. He broke his. I just stopped protecting him from the consequences.”


By: Jason Cross
Published: October 12, 2024

There are exactly forty-nine ways to break a man. I know this because I’ve catalogued them over twenty years as a fixer in this city. You can take his money, his reputation, his health, his hope. But the fiftieth? The fiftieth is the one that doesn't just break him. It erases him.

And my name is Jason. This is my POV story about loyalty, and the woman who taught me that some debts are paid not in cash, but in blood.


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